Salih Özkan
March 23, 2014
Japanese and Chinese
Europeans and Americans usually have
difficulty in separating Japanese from Chinese. They think that there is no
difference between each other as they think they look similar and speak the
same language. However, there are a lot of differences. In fact, Japanese
differ from Chinese in terms of their appearance, culture, language, education
level, and communication with other countries.
First, although Japanese and Chinese
look like each other, there are some differences in their appearance that can
be easily seen to differ them. First of all, Japanese and Chinese differ in
face color. Japanese's faces are generally a bit pale, whereas Chinese's faces
are usually a bit dark. Second, Japanese and Chinese differ in the shapes of face.
While Japanese generally have narrow face, Chinese usually have round face.
Third, Japanese and Chinese differ in dressing. As Japanese follow the western
culture, they often want to get dressed just as the western people do. However,
since Chinese tend to follow their traditions, they frequently get dressed in
according to their traditions.
Second, although Japan and China are
located in Asia, the cultures between Japanese and Chinese are very different.
First, Japanese culture and Chinese culture differ in the concept of food.
Although rice is worthy in two culture, Japanese prefer seafood, while Chinese
prefer roasting food. Second, Japanese culture and Chinese culture differ in
the concept of family matter. Even though family is an important matter in both
of two cultures, Chinese have strict rules about the family, while Japanese do
not get involved in the family matter as Chinese do. Third, Japanese culture
and Chinese culture differ in the concept of music. Although both of the
cultures try to keep their music tradition alive, Japanese seem to lose their
bond as they follow the western culture.
Third, although others might think
that Japanese and Chinese speak the same language as they sound similar when
they speak, the language they speak is very different. First, Japanese and
Chinese differ in writing. Although Japanese and Chinese use the same alphabet,
which is Kanji, Japanese use Altaic language family, whereas Chinese use
Sino-Tibetan language family. Second, Japanese and Chinese differ in the
production of sounds. Although they may sound similar when they speak, Chinese
use /l/ and /ʃ/ sounds frequently. However, Japanese tend to add /u:/ and /ɒ/
sounds to the end of the words. Third, Japanese and Chinese differ in that
Chinese is far more spoken than Japanese. Although Japanese is known to be a lot
easier to learn, people prefer Chinese as it is more important in business.
Fourth, although Japan and China are
located in Asia, the education level between Chinese and Japanese is very
different. First, Japanese and Chinese differ in the graduation degree they
hold. While almost all Japanese hold university degree, some Chinese do not
even have any degree. Second, Japanese and Chinese differ in the number of
scientists they have brought up. Although Chinese have brought great
scientists, some of them are Zhang Heng and Gu Chaohao, Japanese are one of the
most successful nationalities that have brought up a great number of
scientists. Third, Japanese and Chinese differ in the number of book they read
for a year. While a Japanese averages 20 books for a year, a Chinese can only
average two books.
Fifth, although Japan and China are
located in Asia, the communication they establish with other countries is very
different. First, Japanese and Chinese differ in kindness they show to other
nationalities. Although both of the communities went through some hard time
with other nationalities, Japanese are very cordial, whereas Chinese are not
nice to others. Second, Japanese and Chinese differ in hospitality. Although
both of the communities were usually in a war against others in the past,
Japanese are more likely to welcome other people, while Chinese are more likely
to ignore them. Third, Japanese and Chinese differ in the respect they show to
other religions. Although most of Japanese and Chinese believe in the same
religion which is Buddhism, Japanese respect others' faith, but Chinese force
others to believe the same religion Chinese have.
To sum up, Japanese and Chinese can
be separated by observing their image, traditions, language, academic level, and
communication with other communities. By observing it, people will be able to
identify who are Japanese or Chinese. People should be able to identify them because
it helps people to know who they communicate with, and with that knowledge
people will act how they should act. Furthermore, it is really an annoying
question to ask them whether they are Japanese or Chinese.
Outline
I. Introduction
1.
Giving background information
about the difficultness of separating Japanese and Chinese
2.
Making a turnabout
3.
Thesis Statement
II. Body Paragraph 1
1.
Difference in appearance
2.
Difference in face color
2.1. Paleness to darkness
3.
Difference in the shapes of
face
3.1. Narrowness to roundness
4.
Difference in dressing
4.1. Modern to tradition
III. Body Paragraph 2
1.
Difference in culture
2.
Difference in the concept of
food
2.1. Seafood to roasting food
3.
Difference in the concept of
family matter
3.1. Strictness of rules to less involvement
4.
Difference in the concept of
music
4.1. Losing their bond to keeping their tradition alive
IV. Body Paragraph 3
1.
Difference in language
2.
Difference in writing
2.1. Altaic language family to Sino-Tibetan language family
3.
Difference in sounds
3.1. Intense usage of /l/ and /ʃ/ in Chinese
3.2. Intense usage of /u:/ and /ɒ/ at the end of the words in
Japanese
4.
Difference in the number of
speakers
4.1. Importance of Chinese in business
V. Body Paragraph 4
1.
Difference in the education
level
2.
Difference in the graduation
degree they hold
2.1. Holding university degree to not having any degree
3.
Difference in the number of
scientists they have brought up
3.1. The success of Japanese
in the number of scientists they have brought up
4.
Difference in the number of
book they read for a year
4.1. Averaging 20 books to 2 books
VI. Body Paragraph 4
1.
Difference in the communication
with other countries
2.
Difference in kindness they
show
2.1. Being cordial to being not nice
3.
Difference in hospitality
3.1. Welcoming others to
ignoring others
4.
Difference in the respect they
show to other religions
4.1. Respecting others' faith to forcing others to believe their
religion
VII. Conclusion
1.
Summarizing
2.
Explaining the reason why
people should be able to identify them.
* Don't you need an article before ''narrow face and round face'' ?
YanıtlaSil* Although rice is worthy in two culture (Sing-Plu), Japanese prefer seafood, (delete comma) while Chinese prefer roasting food.
* Japanese seem to lose their bond (Sing-Plu)
* the number of book they read (Sing-Plu)
* their image, traditions, language, academic level, and communication with other communities (Revise Sing-Plu)
1-) Yes, thank you
YanıtlaSil2-) We need to use a comma before "while" if we use it as a subordinator clause
3-) I disagree that there is a mistake.
4-) you are right, thank you.
5-) You are right, thank you